self study works

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please comment to improve my work... ..... my very first works...

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[Chista]

Is it meant to be that size? Cause I can't really comment on something that small :$

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hehe... sorry... i had a problem... but im working on it... just for a while...

some one here knows other sites than photobucket ?

[Ronar91]

hmmmm Zaraki?Anyway I wont comment on him...xD so I guess this is your first one right?IMO it's pretty good for a first try.U could have used some brushed though to make it look a little more elaborate...or play with lights and shadows..use the "blending options" and stuff...I see u used the filter(u did use it didn't u?xD) for the "bricks" in the background which looks pretty good.
So concluding i think u did a pretty good job and I believe u can do a lot better if u play around with photoshop a little more
rep for u girl!

[Pineappledishwasher]

I dont see shait xD

[fidosdeader]

wow... this is not a small art... maybe u should resize it... just like ronar said, u should use some brushes to make the sig better thou.. anyway good job for a first timer..

[Pineappledishwasher]

Goood for a first try, blend the render a bit better, use more of the sig with effects, since you put Zaraki to the right, there is a huge spot on the left with nothing but a background and a small font, which doesnt fit anyway..

good luck

[Vergil the Fallen]

Nothing good in it. Disgrace to gfx. Photoshop is not for you. Please quit.....kidding:P
Well for a first time, its very good. I mean when i did my my first sig, i did not know the meaning of opacity, blending etc. As mentioned before, add some brushes to it, some good texture and u'll be okay. I suggest start from smudging and slowly build up on that.

[grimmjaw88]

Good work for a first time...keep working

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sorry for the input of the size of the art.... i had a problem using the photobucket... ... nevertheless i manage somehow...

anyways... thank you so much for the advises.... i will really work hard on it... and really i need to practice... i will follow your suggestions... ... i'll make experiments on it...

also, vegil, you scared me, your really a little mean... but still im happy on what you commented, thanks you!...