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Default Kakashi sig - Nov. 21st, 2009, 10:49 AM



this is my first sig and it sucks :P i just want your opinions on how to improve it :P and how to make some text which looks cool and is easy :P






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Default Nov. 21st, 2009, 03:20 PM

I'm not much of a sig maker, so I won't critique you on the sig, but your render seems as if it was stretched out. I think that's where you should start, with a new render.


   
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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 04:12 AM

I agree with oye.. also try working on a flow..
the chidori has something behind it that doenst match.. and the texts not good... try using some effects.. thats all i have to say..


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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 09:16 AM

hey guys .. thanks for the feedback and im making one now .. but id just like to show you how it would look if i removed the render... also can anyone suggest a good one? thnx


Also i suck with texts... as u can see :P does nay1 kno a where i can find a quick tutorial for it that would fit in with the image? thanks

ok this is an epic fail but tell me if the render is good and the hard light mode layer is good for it






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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 10:06 AM

There are many problems with this, but the main problem I see is that you are trying to take too many steps at once. You should start with a beginner's tutorial like this one.
Once you get the basics, it should be easier to move on from there.


   
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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 11:33 AM

i got this with the tutorial... and its better than my work :P






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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 11:50 AM

now this is a sig.. u see the flow? first one and second one, the white is too bright..
if u really want some brushes and texts then go to deviantART: where ART meets application!
.. for very good brushes and texts, ask one of the legends on bn.. like Einar, ZangetsuBankai, Blackmamba, Vergil the Fallen, or gloryfadesxp(he is also good..)


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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 01:52 PM

yea ill be asking Zb about good effects to use :P and wat 2 sigs did u mean :S i made 1






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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 02:09 PM

the second one ; the one with the naruto render..
also wat photoshop program are u using? i use Gimp cause its compatible with linux, if i had a choice i would use Adobe photoshop.. but it would make my computer slow..


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Default Nov. 22nd, 2009, 06:38 PM

See? That's much better. Now that you have the basics down, you can try to move forward to some more complex tutorials. I'm sure you're well on your way to becoming great. I'm sure the next step incorporates c4ds and other complex things that make sigs look great.


   
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