Need help with my own manga

[Chrisuu]

I would like to ask U guys
for some wel aprreciated help


To give some bether insight of manga il give you gusy the begining story
Caus i dunno what names to realy give them

i only get two outof my head Chisuu(my japanese name)
and Asawa-san

......... <---- that indicates charcater wich needs name wich is mostly al of them

beignh authistic wil he explained by this nice wikipedia side so i dont have to caus i hate to talk about it mainly for some reason some smart guy might already know

Autism - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

story
The autistic time traveller

His name is ………….. he’s 16 years old and a transfer student, but he’s not your average kid he’s autistic and also a time traveller.
other persons are two teachers atr the school the boys lil sis witch wil be named Asawa
also the name of the girl he saves and hear mom and dads name an her siblings names 1 brother one sister
and also the mom and dad of the boy
The story begins on ordinary day like al his other days

……. Just had his first day at his new school witch is quite hard for a autistic kid.
He walks trough the park a bird lands in front of his feet sinking in dreams he thinks of what the bird thinks at the very moment.
After the park walk he goes into the town onwards to his house when he comes to the railroad crossing he sees a girl fall of her bike on the middle of the track, suddenly the light of the crossing go on he hears a train coming he gets overwhelmed by sudden urge.

He runs onto the track grabs the girl and just as the train is about to hit him and the girl, suddenly time comes to an sudden stop everything around him is standing still.
The boy look around amazed al of a sudden he hears a voice.

The voice sound like one voice but at the same tome more voices …….-kun looks around to see who’s talking to him it doesn’t make any sense it simply not possible.
Then he looks upward the voice says ………- kun I thinks its time for me to help you out a bit to make your live more bearable.
…..-kun says but mister how?, and what this al about time has stopped how can that happen he says heavily confused.
The voice says be patient my boy time will learn, overwhelmed by fear confuses he screams learn what!!.
The voice says calm I don’t do any harm I’m here to make thing a bit easier I hope.
I will give you a power witch involves time travelling and time stopping like I just did.

The voice leaves ….-kun says wait mister how do I turn on the time again?
Suddenly he gets sucked back in time and land in the park he was some time ago the same bird lands in front of his feat again on exactly the same spot but this time the girl is lying aside him on with here bicycle.

He sits their till she’s awake and says al stuttering of shyness how are you that was one pretty bad fall.
They have a little chat and he takes her home because she’s in to much pain to ride her bicycle.

[clpidn57751]

Wow that got me hooked from the first paragraph
ok first the name of the main character............
uhh id go with somehing catchy...clever...not used before...uhh....Maguri?
and the name of the mysterious voice.....Toya?
those would be the names id use but wut other help do u need?

[The_Musician__]

thats pretty nice man keep at it

[Chrisuu]

Originally Posted by clpidn57751

Wow that got me hooked from the first paragraph
ok first the name of the main character............
uhh id go with somehing catchy...clever...not used before...uhh....Maguri?
and the name of the mysterious voice.....Toya?
those would be the names id use but wut other help do u need?

About toya actualky the voice he hears is GOD but he wil find that out later

But in the story thersnot just one god god consist out of sevral earth humans
so i wil cal the guy thats a part of god Toya Hakuri

so now the names opf the one male an one femal;e teachers
and the siblinmgs of tbooth the girl and the boy
and both of their parents

Hint siblings of the boy already has name his lik siter Asawa shes around 8 years old
The boys father 45 years old mother 38

Girls sibling 4 year old liltle sister 19 year old brother
father also around 45 mother also aroudn mid 40s

and some school friends of the girl 2 girls and one boy wich is kind of the guy whos like a real clumsy guy but friendly

[darkendrence]

dude great idea. I mean really. That should be extra great for kids with autism. my friend has autism. you dont hear too many mangas that even have that subject in it much less the main character being autistic. bravo. im rooting for ya man.

[Chrisuu]

Originally Posted by darkendrence

dude great idea. I mean really. That should be extra great for kids with autism. my friend has autism. you dont hear too many mangas that even have that subject in it much less the main character being autistic. bravo. im rooting for ya man.

I wil not disapoint you im cuerntly designing the charcters if some are done shal i sneak
peak them

[Chrisuu]

Okay i shal not sneak previeuw

[MhaiKuchiki#06]

hmmm.... actualy i also write a manga and every time i wrote and draw i see to it that the characters is suitable for the personality of one of them.
i remember my character name is cherry its to obiously that i got that name from the flower of cherry bloossoms like that name i give to my character she is pure lovable and pretty right?

so my opinion in your manga that you creating is just be your self and think about the things in your environment the nature, the people that you encounter your friends and family im sure you can create the most beautiful manga ever. couse you create it not only by your mind but by your heart....

[sasuke-kun23]

Originally Posted by Chrisuu

I would like to ask U guys
for some wel aprreciated help


To give some bether insight of manga il give you gusy the begining story
Caus i dunno what names to realy give them

i only get two outof my head Chisuu(my japanese name)
and Asawa-san

......... <---- that indicates charcater wich needs name wich is mostly al of them

beignh authistic wil he explained by this nice wikipedia side so i dont have to caus i hate to talk about it mainly for some reason some smart guy might already know

Autism - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

story
The autistic time traveller

His name is ………….. he’s 16 years old and a transfer student, but he’s not your average kid he’s autistic and also a time traveller.
other persons are two teachers atr the school the boys lil sis witch wil be named Asawa
also the name of the girl he saves and hear mom and dads name an her siblings names 1 brother one sister
and also the mom and dad of the boy
The story begins on ordinary day like al his other days

……. Just had his first day at his new school witch is quite hard for a autistic kid.
He walks trough the park a bird lands in front of his feet sinking in dreams he thinks of what the bird thinks at the very moment.
After the park walk he goes into the town onwards to his house when he comes to the railroad crossing he sees a girl fall of her bike on the middle of the track, suddenly the light of the crossing go on he hears a train coming he gets overwhelmed by sudden urge.

He runs onto the track grabs the girl and just as the train is about to hit him and the girl, suddenly time comes to an sudden stop everything around him is standing still.
The boy look around amazed al of a sudden he hears a voice.

The voice sound like one voice but at the same tome more voices …….-kun looks around to see who’s talking to him it doesn’t make any sense it simply not possible.
Then he looks upward the voice says ………- kun I thinks its time for me to help you out a bit to make your live more bearable.
…..-kun says but mister how?, and what this al about time has stopped how can that happen he says heavily confused.
The voice says be patient my boy time will learn, overwhelmed by fear confuses he screams learn what!!.
The voice says calm I don’t do any harm I’m here to make thing a bit easier I hope.
I will give you a power witch involves time travelling and time stopping like I just did.

The voice leaves ….-kun says wait mister how do I turn on the time again?
Suddenly he gets sucked back in time and land in the park he was some time ago the same bird lands in front of his feat again on exactly the same spot but this time the girl is lying aside him on with here bicycle.

He sits their till she’s awake and says al stuttering of shyness how are you that was one pretty bad fall.
They have a little chat and he takes her home because she’s in to much pain to ride her bicycle.

wow..O.o what a capacity..