I think it would be better if it's not too burned or dodged, and has more depth. o.o" The signature size is pretty huge, too - which makes both sides of the signature pretty plain, even though you have that 'effects'. But good job with it. ^^
Momo and Arco render's pretty good, still sharp around the edges, but good nonetheless. Thanks for the share.
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Oh man too bright. You cannot even see the render itself, it just seems like a random abstract shape or something rather than Hinamori herself. A little use of grunge brushes and thats it? Try add more stuff to it rather than leaving more than half of the sig blank. A good flow, focal identified will do the job. If you go with the brushes, use them so that they serve a good, decent purpose to the whole sig's structure. Never use them randomly. For instance, the lower left half is completely blank.