It should look more smooth in my opinion. The lines seem so hard and stiff. Especially the Ichigos chin in the first picture. After you get the hang og smoothing your drawings out, the better you'll be at drawing generally.
Excellent work! I like it....just be careful with the lines next time coz the drawings can be better with smooth lines, the shading is good, great drawings. Keep it up! You've got the talent.
It should look more smooth in my opinion. The lines seem so hard and stiff. Especially the Ichigos chin in the first picture. After you get the hang og smoothing your drawings out, the better you'll be at drawing generally.
Good luck.
thanks for the advice. ill make sure my lines are more smoother.