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Talking Banners on the go! - 09-03-2008

lol i wasnt actually supposed to post this up yet. xD but anyways..

ok. so i went crazy here. i messed up my BG. XD but it turned out how i wanted it to be. wooohaah. *Credits self* XD

anyways here it is!

oh and i wasnt much in the mood to fix my tear render. XD so sorry about it.

Tear Banner No Flower
http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...BannervER1.jpg

Tear Banner Shadow Flower

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...BannervER2.jpg

Tear Banner Flower Glow

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...BannervER3.jpg


And the lone Vesperia Banner. XD

Vesperia Banner Border Shadow Butterfly O-o

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...BannerVer1.jpg


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Default 09-03-2008

i think the first one is nice, the rest are just modifications of it. It ridiculously simple, a little c4d's here and there. There is little blending (the fading of the render itself on the left side cannot be called blending). I see you have discovered the magic of opacity change. Long way to go but an improvement nevertheless.




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O-o lol actually i know already about the opacity thingy. it was only now i used it though. XD

and lol again. the third tear banner is the original actually. O____O i just misplaced them. xDDD

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Tear Banner 1 - The "Tales of the Abyss" logo is too huge, in my opinion. Pretty good background, although I wish it wasn't all blue. Maybe add some more colors to that... experiment. How come her right arm's kinda.. err.. overlapped by the blue background? I don't know if you were trying to show blending through that, but I think it's a bad idea since the girl is pretty bright, and then her arm becomes dark or something. o.o"

Tear Banner 2 - mm, dark. :\
+ the comments in the first one.

Tear Banner 3 - I like this one the most, although take into consideration the comments I have on the first one. ^^

Tales of Vesperia - They're all too bright, even for the background... the definition on their faces are hadly seen. >_> Get rid of the border in my opinion, at least, the scanlines-like ones. A 1px border would be good. And.. I think it would look better if all three characters are in the center and stuff. That's just my opinion, of course.



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O-o well hmm..you could say its my style. O-o xD

okaay..i somehow cant remove the glow on the vesperia. xD but here is a no border version

http://i201.photobucket.com/albums/a...r2noborder.jpg


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uhm....first there....tear render and abyss logo randomly slapped on a blue background...isn't that pretty much it? heres the opacity change on the arm but imo that looks bad and a little pointless....in fact i once made that mistake a long time ago lol
also....how much of the background did u make urself?
anyway, quite simply MUCH MUCH MUCH too simple
(like that its Tear though! )

uhm...already commented a little on the vesperia one in nume's FC
they're all too bright
border is bad...none of the sides are the same width......
uhm...doesn't look like theres any blending whatsoever.....
also theres no focus. all three cars stand out, one of the left, two on the right
plus bit random and uneven having two on the right and just one on the left.....
also text seems much too simple imo



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Im no pro but I like them



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i realy like the first on


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Nice ... I like the last one ( Vesperia Banner )


   
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uhm....first there....tear render and abyss logo randomly slapped on a blue background...isn't that pretty much it? heres the opacity change on the arm but imo that looks bad and a little pointless....in fact i once made that mistake a long time ago lol
also....how much of the background did u make urself?
anyway, quite simply MUCH MUCH MUCH too simple
(like that its Tear though! )

uhm...already commented a little on the vesperia one in nume's FC
they're all too bright
border is bad...none of the sides are the same width......
uhm...doesn't look like theres any blending whatsoever.....
also theres no focus. all three cars stand out, one of the left, two on the right
plus bit random and uneven having two on the right and just one on the left.....
also text seems much too simple imo


lol 50% made by myself on the vesperia banner (i messed with it) then in the tear one 41% (again i messed with it) xD


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