uhm....first there....tear render and abyss logo randomly slapped on a blue background...isn't that pretty much it? heres the opacity change on the arm but imo that looks bad and a little pointless....in fact i once made that mistake a long time ago lol

also....how much of the background did u make urself?
anyway, quite simply MUCH MUCH MUCH too simple
(like that its Tear though!

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uhm...already commented a little on the vesperia one in nume's FC
they're all too bright
border is bad...none of the sides are the same width......
uhm...doesn't look like theres any blending whatsoever.....
also theres no focus. all three cars stand out, one of the left, two on the right
plus bit random and uneven having two on the right and just one on the left.....
also text seems much too simple imo