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Default Music Flyer - 08-13-2008

A flyer that i made recently to promote my music. Just wanted some comments. While your at it, check out my music page lol MySpace.com - TK: Versatilityâ„¢ - LAUREL, Maryland - Lyrical - www.myspace.com/tkskyrecords



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Hmm, I don't like the shadow effect of the text... Also, don't like the font that much it seems odd in places. o.o" As for the background there's nothing that intriguing happening. ._.




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I agree, you may want it to stand out from other flyers I have seen. Make it different so that ppl will say - who is this group


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Lose the strokes. _-" Also, I really don't get the transition in the background between the bright, blue sky to a dark, starry sky o.O

It would be nice to use not alternate the font colors per letter. And like what Einar mentioned, I don't like the drop shadow on the text that much, too... usually, on flyers, the simpler the better. Make the background complement with whatever it is you're advertising. ^^



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...I thought the backgorund would be obvious, its supposed to be pretty much fading from the cloudy sky to outer space...Any comments on the page?


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