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Lol... I think CC discouraged her a bit =P... Lol
Bt yes! it is good to post stuff here because it is always good to get criticism and a heads up on other peoples' views =D

Well yes, nice first try =D
You could have blended the Gin more, bt that takes practice so no surprise that it aint brill on your first try.
As well as what CC said about the font. Its good to try a few different ones to test which kind of font works best with your work. Some fonts can jst break your work up =P

Nt that I am very good at graphic stuff bt nice first try anyway ^~^
Keep it up =]